Windhover

Hi Windhover,
Thank you for acknowledgment. I have to say I far from feel a victim because I rhyme. I am interested in free verse and have tried it on a few occasions but failed miserably. I feel it is a certain frame of mind you have to attain in order to get the free flow rhythm. Perhaps you could give me a few pointers on the matter at your convenience please. I would like to attain even half the standard that you have set in your writings, of course it would be a massive achievement to equal.
Regards, Shay.

Wondered if I could send you a revised copy of my poem "the Wake" for your opinion?
Aster

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